Big and round

and i held in my hands.

Could i taste this?

Should i dare?

I licked it, because i couldn't  help myself.

Smooth, soft to the touch, yet hard as a rock.

i wanted it.

I sniffed it.. fresh.

i kissed it and wished i could take it all in my mouth.

So i did.

Tasting it.. my tounge doing dances,

i let the sweet, yet bitter juices flow

into my mouth...

I felt the fuzziness against my lips...

my tastebuds would never be the same.

Closing my eyes,

i licked my fingers of the juices

that fell from it as i gently bit the tender flesh.

and i knew that it was the damn best peach i had ever eaten.

Hi Ron,

You're a poet and you don't know it.

However, I think your innocent new thread has just proven that the readers only want to look at the models and their Forum threads. You also managed to bump poor Richard one place down the non sticky thread list :-)

Culebron

Hi Ron,

I do agree with Culebron.  The poem is good, but yes this doesn't belong on a froum page where models only want to see their shoots.  Just to prove the point... look how many views you got so far..  it has nothing to do with the models and i have noticed that your other threads hasn't gotten much notice at all... we have been trying to tell the administration this, but they don't seem to agree.

Okay the nice things out of the way first,  thanks for the compliments from both.  That's where it stops.

I too had thought it would be better for two forums.. it was one idea i had. Then i thought, no because if no one reads the forum much and doesn't comment.. .what good would it do and i want my things read at least.  So all in all, just leave it like it is. I don't really appreciate the other comments about my things not belonging on this forum, or no one commenting on my threads. I can damn well see that.  No to argue and on ones forum is very out of line, but now i guess i will do it on mine. 

Earlier in the week i  really considered leaving the site completely. For my own personal reasons, i felt i should just stop all together. That was stupid of me.  In case it hasn't been noticed, i comment on just about every model there is on this site.. actually i  think i have on every one, and with the exception of two threads, and i think i am accurate on that, i even answer those. I participate a lot more than people realise and even buy prints of the models.  I do not see why my threads should be somewhere else on the forum, just because they are not model related. There are others who have posted threads on this forum as well, but has anyone mentioned theirs directly?

Jim who the hell are you?  You, as i see, have just recently started posting to the forum, yet have not dared comment much at all on the models?  Culebron, this has never been an issue with you until just recently.  I have a great respect for you, but i don't think you should point out how my threads don't seem to be interesting enough to be read by others unless it's a thread dealing with models... and no that's not exactly what you said, but in a roundabout way.  In one way  you come to my aid and said in an earlier thread, that i am a very high contributor to the site, but yet are quick to point out the obvious here.. I CAN SEE THAT. 

This is all getting old, and the last few days i have been a royal pain the backside.... and yes here is the part where i take things to heart.  As for bumping poor Ricard, i apologise, but if you look closely, i have been the only who made any comments on his MODEL THREAD.  If you are so concerned about the models having comments posted... why don't you go and comment on all of them, plus the back pages.

I put this poem up as something fun.. not to be backlashed about where it does or does not belong.   The forum was meant to be a place where people could post their comments and thoughts about the models or anything.. the site being the "friendly" place on the web ... and for the most part it has. Why does one have to get defensive? 

I wondered if this could be the same Ron on Jakes thread... i love the end.. kind of a great catcher at the end.  I, of course, was thinking very naughty in the mind...but then again one can refer to the peach as many things in imagery.  Clever. 

Hello Sylvie,

Yes i am the same Ron.. thanks for the compliment.  I write a lot.. and sometimes i have some pretty way out there stuff and other times it totally sucks.. I am glad you liked it.  

So Ron, whose peach are you thinking of when you read this?  I bet i can guess.  Decent write mate.

Hello Micah,

I have to keep some mystery....lol.  i am glad to see you like it.  Thanks for the compliment. I have many many more like 7 notebooks of poetry.

Sylvie, Cule, Jim and Micah,

to add to my last post.. i do have 7 notebooks full of poetry.. dating from the time i was 22 to now.  I started writing in high school.. i was 14 years at the time and when i graduated high school, i had over 1100 poems.  Sadly they have disappeard over the years, but i was able to start again after an absence of writing from the time i was about 20 until i was 22 as mentioned.  I got very lazy over the years and have a box full of poetry that i wrote on anything, from coffee filters, scraps of paper, napkins.. .anything i could find.  Now as a form of therapy, i have decided to tackle that box.. and i can bet that 7 notebooks accumulates.  I have been off kilter lately and someone very close to me can attest to that.  It's because of him in a way, that i tackle this project.  His words were, "find a hobby," but i already had one..

Of course some is very naughty...lol some is funny, i can write about anything.. even create a verse  about a pepsi can, which i did in high school.  I am excited to be doing this latest project and who knows one day i will be published.  Usually i am very private in what i share with people when it comes to my writing, but i think it's time.   I have always had a habit of dating, and signing my name to everything i have ever written.  I did contact a copyright lawyer and he suggested i do that, but i informed him that i had been doing that since i wrote my first poem. One of the smart things i ever did in life, if don't do anything else.

So who knows i may be sharing more with the forum, but they are copyrighted....lol.

cheers

By the way Micah, whose peach do you think i should taste?m  lol.  

Hello Ron,

Well i was thinking maybe Chris, or Brody possibly Jake.

Well Micah,

since you would like to know... i definitely favour Jake.. and Chris is such a cute guy.. Brody is much too young for me and i am sure he wouldn't fancy me anyway.. plus he has a boyfriend... and so now i have to tell you whose peach i would like to lick... Angus  then i will go for Jake.. but Angus is straight.. darn it.

Ron you have some good tastes.   If Jake were straight i would fancy him a go.

Come on guys. . You call this good?  This guy is all over the forum. I wish he would get a hint.

Thank you Shannon. I appreciate the compliment. Jake definitely is a handsome bloke.  You shoulc  check out Angus,  he is really hot. 

Karl...i think i have earned the right to be all over the forum.. and a hint?  What, that i am a great guy??  lol  thank you.